Good effort.
A remarkable amount of effort has obviously been put into this animation, and I commend you for that. However, that doesn't take away from the fact that the story was extremely cliché, as were some of the characters and animation!
There were a number of points where you clearly avoided animating that part (such as when she takes off her arms) and the quality of animation seemed to fluctuate wildly!
It had potential at the beginning, but then it settled into the old story rut. I thought the old guy was the deepest character there, but even then it was lacking.
Reading some of these reviews, it seems that the ones that DON'T give 10/10 seem to be the most constructive! The addition of anime stylings seems to have pushed the score somewhat as the fanboys max everything.
Regardless, well done for finishing it!